This peer review encouraged me to further enrich my writing. I was intrigued by the use of questions in other’s work, and had incorporated this idea into my own writing. I believe the use of questions throughout one’s work, hooks or draws in the reader’s attention. Another aspect that I now wish I had incorporated into my work was the use of “Effective Altruism” or “replaceability”, along with the ideas that come along with these ideologies. I believe this experience had opened my eyes to new possibilities to further enrich my essay. From this experience, I have decided that I will continue to seek other’s opinions on my work to further better myself as a writer.
