The main argument which Jonah Lehrer portrays throughout his essay “The Future of Science… Is Art?” is that art needs to be incorporated into science in order to make further advancements. Lehrer discusses and provides… 

In the essay written by Yo Yo Ma, who is a well known cellist and songwriter, describes the need for integration of art into the school system. Yo Yo Ma describes this integration as STEAM… 

Through the reading provided by “They Say I Say”, I was able to better curate and add quotes throughout my essay. One thing my essay heavily lacked were quotes, I was unsure of where or… 

For my essay, I had determined that the first aspect I needed to determine was what my thesis was. I determined my thesis was that art had mental as well as physical benefits to one’s… 

From this peer review, I now have a better grasp on what is necessary to be revised in my essay. The first step, my goal. My goal is determine what is my thesis? Is my… 

In the peer review there were three categories which needed to be addressed in our annotations. These three categories are ideas, evidence, and organization. The first category, ideas, included the writer’s thesis. One annotation I… 

This peer review encouraged me to further enrich my writing. I was intrigued by the use of questions in other’s work, and had incorporated this idea into my own writing. I believe the use of… 

Obtaining background information influences my opinion on the essay because prior I believed that the Effective Altruists believed in actually doing good deeds, while now I believe they primarily believe in giving donations. When I… 

Two opinions that I had noticed in Southan’s text are breaks are selfish, and that even though you enjoy something that does not mean you should pursue it. In Southan’s text the reader notices a…